Friday, September 13, 2013

WRITING TIP #1: USE STRONG VERBS.

If you are a writer, the single best thing you can do to make your writing better is to use strong verbs. 

Now, this has a lot to do with appropriate Diction: the choice and use of words and phrases in speech or writing. 

I'm sure most of you have read something in which a lot "big" words are used that don't necessarily make sense in context. That is probably because the author is not using those words in a meaningful way. This comes from the fact that a lot of words in the English language have different meanings, and/or many, many synonyms (hence, my last post about my fascination with the many meanings of SWAG). But, synonyms are not exactly words with the same meaning. In my opinion, it's quite the opposite. 

Take the word  Stare: to look with a fixed or vacant expression.

This word gets used a lot in dramatic fiction, but the word itself is a blank canvas. Consider this phrase:
She stared at him.
This sentence tells you nothing besides that there is a female looking at a male. This could appear in any scene of any story of any genre. One might argue that we don't get any extended meaning from this sentence because it is not in context. But that's precisely my point: when I say use a "stronger verb," I mean use a verb that doesn't have to rely on its immediate context to convey meaning. 

For example, one of Stare's synonyms, Gaze, is an established part of romance novel vocabulary because it connotes something more than just a blank expression: to look steadily and intently, esp. in admiration, surprise, or thought.

Now consider:
She gazed at him.
This sentence implies that the female, whoever she is, is looking at the male in a more specific way than a blank stare. In the case of a romance novel, you can take a pretty good guess that this sentence is from a quiet, tender scene, not an action-packed chase.

But if you use another of Stare's synonyms, Glare, you completely change the mood of the entire scene from tender admiration to fierce, intent anger.

This is not to say Stare is not a perfectly useful word. Rather, if you intentionally want a character to look at another character or thing with a blank expression, perhaps because the character doesn't understand something, or is too emotionally drained to muster any emotion, wonderful. The point of this distinction, the point of Diction, is making intentional and meaningful word choices to help your writing say exactly what you want it to say. There are so many words out there, why wouldn't you want to find just the right one?

This can be applied to all parts of speech, or course, but verbs, the so-called "action words" of language, do the most work, and are, in my opinion, the most important part of any piece of writing.

Wednesday, August 21, 2013

On the Meaning of a Particular Word. Or Acronym. Possibly both.

I was recently very bothered by an IHop commercial in which a man says, "this waffle has swag!" I have always believed that Swag meant "Stuff We all Get," having gone to a university where we got a lot of swag on a regular basis (t-shirts, lanyards, bracelets, beer can cozies, you name it.)

"Why can't people even be bothered to use slang words correctly, let alone real words?" (Don't get me started on literally or epic.)

My father, sitting in an armchair beside me in the living room, corrected me. 


"No, it means "ill-gotten gains," he said, in his knowledgeable fatherly that makes me think he would be a great history teacher if he weren't a fantastic travel agent.

Curious, I decided to research this topic. Apparently, the word "swag" has several different definitions. So far I have found 16. I don't know about you, but that seems pretty excessive for one word/acronym. Thoughts?

1. Stuff We All Get (promotional items given away for free)
2. Something We All Get tired of hearing
3. Something We [insert nationality beginning with A here] Got
4. Secretly We Are Gay
5. Shit Wasn't All Good
6. Southern Whites Against Godzilla
7. Something Worn Awfully in the Ghetto
8. Scientific Wild Ass Guess
9. Silver, Wine, Art and Gold
10. an ornamental festoon of flowers, fruit, and greenery.
11. money or goods taken by a thief or burglar.
12. to arrange in or decorate with a swag or swags of fabric. 
13. to travel with one's personal belongings in a bundle.
14. a bedroll
15. originally from the Scottish slang word "swagger" which was a description of the way some Scots walk (in a swaying motion), the word was then misinterpreted by the English as "the way someone presents themselves."
16. the catchphrase of douchebags everywhere. 
17. a process in which the dimensions of an item are altered using a die.

Sources:
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=swag%20(s.w.a.g.)
http://ph.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20120218065836AAmqqNA
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swag

Sunday, April 7, 2013

A Bookstore for the Modern Reader

As much as I love Google, my search engine of choice, I'm always pleased to hear when a small company can take on the big wigs in the corporate world and come out smiling.

This article from Forbes.com explains how Kobo, a small Canadian e-reading company, took up the mantle of selling ebooks in independent bookstores that Google shrugged off this past spring. Google's program was cancelled due to lack of success, but "in the first month of the Kobo partnership (Oct. last year), independent bookstores sold more ebooks than in the entire two years working with Google" (Greenfield).

Though I'm not much of an e-reader myself, I encourage those who are to check out your local bookstore for your next ebook, rather than buying it off Amazon. Online ebooksellers may have cornered the market on convenience, but for those of you who may miss the experience of browsing a good old-fashioned bookstore, this could be a way to reclaim that nostalgia while serving your digital-age literary appetite.

On another note, upon entering Forbes' site I was greeted with the following quote, which struck as me as rather pleasantly literary.

Forbes Thought Of The Day
“Not many sounds in life, and I include all urban and rural sounds, exceed in interest a knock at the door. ”
— Charles Lamb

Thursday, April 4, 2013

As a reader, the only thing better than a new book is a free book! 
Make that two free books and a mystery $50 gift card and you got yourself one sweet afternoon. Enter this contest on EpicReads.com for a chance to do just that!


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Saturday, February 23, 2013

Become a Better Writer in One Easy Step: READ




Click this link above for a brilliant article on the importance of good writing in everyday life, no matter your profession. 

Includes my favorite advice for improving writing: Read more.

Short, sweet, and to the point. 

Also a shining example of the correct usage of the words "literally" and "fewer."

Sunday, February 10, 2013

Checking Out a Valentine

When it comes to Valentine's Day, I'm of both minds. As a chronically single person at this time of year, the excessive advertising, monster amounts of Hallmark cards, and heart-shaped Peeps (remember when those were a special Easter-only treat?) kind of get on my nerves. Fortunately (for me) I have a friend whose birthday is on Valentine's Day, so we're going to spend it as one woud spend any other birthday, and not as a superfluously pink-themed day.

However, I am a romantic at heart (is that a pun?), so there's the other side of me that knows I would love to get a cheesy, old-fashioned valentine from someone I care about if it meant that person truly cared about me too. So, in complete ignorance of the commercialism of Valentine's Day and in celebration of telling the people you care about that you do care, here's an adorable literary-themed Valentine.